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The Wild Country:

By Markus Thyme:

October 23, 2006:

 

On silent sandals, Bruce slipped from tree to bush and bush to tree. The doe grazed placidly in the center of the clearing, about 30 strides from him. A bit too far for a clean kill. At that distance an arrow could fatally wound without killing. Then there would be the endless tracking, through the wild country to put a merciful end to the creatures suffering.

‘Better to return without meat,’ thought Bruce.

Donna would be disappointed, as would the little ones. The elders would not smile on him either.

“Alright little doe, I’ll wait,” he mused. “Perhaps you will come to me.”

Bruce set his back against a solid maple tree and lowered himself to a sitting position. He was just within the shadows at the edge of the clearing. He held his bow at the ready. It could become a very long day. It would not be the first long day for Bruce the Younger of Brevard. He was, after all, the hunter. He took a sip of water from his pouch and chewed a piece of dried meat. He waited.

He had found the doe with little effort. The sun was only two hands above the horizon when he found her. He had started the hunt at first light, some time before sunrise. Hunting was best in the short time after first light. He had heard the thing snort before he actually saw it. That gave him the advantage of a silent approach from downwind.

If he could kill the little beast here, it would be an easy carry back to the tunnels. He waited.

The sun was high in the sky when the doe began to drift across the clearing, away from him. After a full morning of patient waiting, Bruce did not wish to give up his prize. He knew it was the time for action.

He rose to his feet, drawing a shaft as he did so, and sprinted after the deer. He was within 10 strides when the doe looked over her shoulder with large startled eyes. Bruce drew back and launched the shaft. He was off balance and his normally deadly aim was slightly off. The shaft took the doe in the shoulder rather than the heart. She reared high and bolted into the forest before he could draw another shaft.

Bruce’s spirit sagged. He stood silently for only a moment. Then, he shouldered his bow and began what he knew would be a long, difficult hike. He followed the doe’s track into the forest.

His advantage was that the doe could not traverse any terrain that would impede him. He was thankful that he had not wounded a goat.

Later, he was not so thankful as he began to realize the stamina and will of his prey. The sun was beginning to turn crimson when he found her, on her knees, against a tall pine. The shaft had broken off on the tree.

“I am sorry little doe,” he said, softly. “Because of my careless shot, you have suffered much pain and terror. I regret my hasty action. I have treated you as badly as the invaders have treated the folk.”

He finished her quickly with his long-knife.

“May you spirit have swift journey,” he whispered.

In a few quick actions, he had her gutted and dressed.


He knew it was time to get away from this place. The blood and guts would attract the wolves and the big cats. Better to not be here with the best part of the kill. He wrapped the heart, liver, and kidneys in the hide from the belly and tied it around his neck. Then he tossed the dressed carcass over his shoulder and followed his trail back toward the tunnels.

The sun dropped suddenly, as it does in these hills. He was in momentary darkness, until his eyes adjusted. Then, there was a pale, silver light from a quarter moon. He knew it would not last the night. It would be mine-bottom black before he reached the tunnels.

He would liked to have waited for dawn. He knew a fire would keep the wild animals at bay. He also knew he could not risk a fire. There was no predicting the invaders. They could be about with their fliers anytime. Better to risk the wild animals than to end up as an invader’s dinner.

Later, as he knew it would, the moon slipped behind a distant mountain and the black night closed in fast. He had just passed the clearing where he had first found the doe. He was still far from the tunnels. He drew his long-knife and held it firmly in his free hand. The rest of his journey would be dangerous, perhaps even fatal.

Just a few steps later, he hear the big cat behind him and he turned to see the eyes as the beast launched itself toward him. He stepped sideways and made an upward swing with the long-knife. He felt it slide off the cat’s ribs as it flew past him. He also felt a claw rake his shoulder. The contact was followed by a searing pain. Bruce knew he had a serious wound.

He turned to see the eyes as two spots of gold in the black of night. He heard the cat breathing as the eyes moved left and right. He took backward steps until his back pressed against a huge tree. He never took his eyes off those yellow spots.

He watched the eyes as the cat paced back and forth looking for an approach. It had great respect for him, as he did for it.

“You may get the meat big cat, but you will have to earn it by risking my long-knife,” he whispered.

He did not know if the cat could see him or not. See or not, it knew where he was aright. The elders had said these beasts could see with no light at all. He wondered about that.

Carefully, he slid the carcass to the ground beside him. Then he eased the bow from his shoulder. Still holding the long knife in the bow hand, he slid a shaft from the holder on his back. He notched it and lifted the bow to aim. His focus was a spot between and one finger below the eyes, where the soft nose bone fits under the forehead. The distance was, at most, four strides.

He loosed the shaft and was rewarded with a scream of rage and pain from the cat. The eyes moved backward several strides and stopped. Bruce notched another shaft and waited. He had but eight shafts left, none to waste. The cat snarled, screamed, and hissed. Bruce waited and watched the eyes. They slowly slid toward the ground. Then they stopped moving. Then the golden spots blinked a few times and went out.

“I am sorry big cat,” sighed Bruce. “You should have settled for the guts. You would still be alive to mate again if you had.”

He thought about trying to retrieve the shaft and thought better of it.

“Maybe you’re dead big cat,” he said. “Maybe you’re just resting. You may keep the shaft. It is a gift from me.”

Bruce knew he was in a bad place. He did not know the extent of his wound. He felt the shoulder. There was a single wet gash, one finger wide, about one hand long, and about one hand from his neck.


“Close,” he mused. “You were after my throat big cat. It is well that I moved when I did.”

He took a pouch from his belt and urinated in it. He poured the warm urine into and over the gash. Then, he cut fleshy strips from part of the deerskin and stuffed them flesh in, into the wound. It would have to do. Where it was, the wound could not be bound. He wished he had some of elder John’s sticking compound, which he made from the joints of killed animals.

“No time for wishes,” he said. “This meat and this wound will attract more beasts. Time to move on.”

It was not to be so. Even as he spoke, he heard the snarling of the wolves and the hiss of another cat. They were not after the dead cat he knew. Not even a cat could stomach the taste of a cat’s flesh. That was for the carrion eaters. These predators were here for Bruce and the carcass.

He pulled a shaft from the holder and notched it. He saw three pairs of eyes. Left of the dead cat, there were two pair of slanted reddish eyes, which belonged to the wolves or wild dogs; no difference. The other pair, to the right, were the golden glow of a big cat.

They approached slowly, weaving back and forth. They were as wary of each other as they were of him. The kept a distance between them. There was much snarling and growling as they warned each other away. None backed off, for the prize was too rich.

Bruce raised the bow and waited. He took careful aim at the spot between and just below the eyes of the wolf in the center. Those eyes were just three strides away and narrowing for the rush when he loosed the shaft.

The wolf howled and snarled with pain, as it was hit. The eyes turned away and with a deep throated roar, the cat was on the wounded wolf. It was over in an instant. The other wolf yelped and retreated.

Bruce quickly notched another shaft. He waited, but the cat was busy dragging the wolf’s carcass a few strides away. He heard the crunch of bone between powerful jaws and teeth. He knew it was fruitless to try to get away. The cat would not be satiated and the other wolf would be back. He had, at best, a few minutes.

Carefully, with eyes always toward the cat, he felt his way around the tree. Then, he found what he had hoped for, a low, sturdy branch. He un-notched the shaft, shouldered the bow, and drew the long-knife. With the knife in one hand, he lifted the carcass over his head and placed it in the crotch of the branch. He sheathed the long-knife and quickly reached for the branch. It was good he was strong for he pulled himself up to sit beside the carcass.

He was still watching for the cat when he saw the eyes of the second wolf returning. Bruce felt above him and found another branch. He lifted the carcass again, then scrambled up behind it. In this way, moving a bit at a time, he got himself about three man-heights above the forest floor. Here, he was safe from the wolf, He could hope that the cat was not hungry enough to risk fighting him in the tree.

He got as comfortable as possible and settled down to wait. It would be a very long time of waiting. He dare not fall asleep, lest he fall from his perch. Then, the cat would finish him quickly.

Time passed slowly. As it did, his eyes adjusted under starlight and he could make out forms on the ground. He identified them by size. Two more wolves showed up. The three were to his left. They circled and weaved a distance from his tree. They had much respect for the cat to his right.

He saw the bulk of another cat approaching.

“Better for me,” he whispered. “Perhaps they will fight.”


Bruce was not so lucky. The cats hissed and snarled, but they stood off from each other.

“At least keep yourselves busy,” he whispered.

Some time later, he could make out the glow of first light in the sky to the East. The crimson of sunrise would follow shortly. His wait was almost over. His danger was not. To get these beasts to leave, Bruce would need to kill at least one of them. The distance they kept made a bowshot unsure. His delicate balance on a tree limb would not improve his aim. With seven shafts remaining, he would prefer to spread his legs and make a clean, close shot. For that, he would have to descend.

“Not yet,” he whispered. “Not yet.”

The sun was two hands above the horizon and yellow, when he made his descent. He discovered how weak he had become, when his throbbing shoulder almost betrayed him. There was intense pain and his fingers wanted to let him drop. He willed otherwise and got to the ground without falling. The carcass was still in the tree.

Immediately, as his feet touched the ground, the cats began closing. The tree was between him and the wolves. So long as the cats were there, they would not come around. He faced his most dangerous adversaries.

He notched a shaft as the cats approached in a stalking posture. One was to his right, the other to his left. It would be a near thing. He had to let them get close enough to make a sure shot, but he could kill only one. He might needs to use his long-knife if he could not get another shaft set.

When the cats were six strides away, he launched his first shaft at the nearest one to his left. It was a clean hit to the brain. The cat stopped, reared up, and fell. As he knew it would, the second cat sprinted toward him. He went to his knee as he notched a second shaft and shot. The distance was two strides and the cat was in mid leap. The shaft took it in the throat as Bruce rolled into the bole of the tree.

The beast hit the earth about one stride beyond Bruce and skidded another three strides. It tried to turn and flopped on it’s side. It was struggling to get up as blood poured from the wounded throat. It had been a lucky hit to the major blood carrier. The cat would not get up.

Bruce stood up. He saw the wolf from the corner of his eye. It was circling toward him to the right of the tree, just enough in line of the tree to make a shot unsure. He knew there would be another one to his left. Suddenly, the tree had switched sides. It was no longer his shield. It was shielding the wolves for their approach.

Bruce back stepped quickly until he was ten strides from the tree. The wolves stopped. They began to circle wider. He saw there were four of them, two on each side of the tree. He had five shafts left. He notched one. He had a plan.

He sprinted toward the pair on his right. As he knew they would, they retreated. Then he whirled with his bow at the ready. Sure enough, the instant he turned his back, the other pair had charged. He fired quickly, taking one of them in the chest. Then he ran past it and turned. He notched an arrow and killed the second one as it turned toward him.

Now there were two left and he had but three shafts remaining. His shoulder was throbbing and he felt the fever in his forehead. His strength was waning. The claw wound was taking it’s toll. He gathered his will and began walking steadily toward the remaining two. They had seen enough. They began to retreat. Then they turned and trotted off. For the time, Bruce had won.


He leaned against the tree for a moment. Then he took some water from his pouch and began chewing some dried meat from his store. It was the first time he had thought to eat since he first stalked the deer. He looked up at the carcass.

“You have cost me dearly,” he said. “It is most likely my reward for treating you so badly. I think we are even now. I have earned your meat.”

Bruce rested a moment more. Then he began the task of retrieving his shafts. One was broken, but he retrieved and cleaned five. With eight shafts, he felt a bit more secure. He knew the two wolves would be back to feast on their brothers. The cats would remain for the carrion eaters, who would slink in at night.

He still had work to do. It was a struggle to get back up the tree. Twice his arm almost betrayed him. He saved himself by demanding a great deal of his good arm and his will. He managed to dump the carcass out of the tree.

As he did so, he said, “I am sorry to be so rude to you. I feel that we are friends now and I would have liked to carry you down. I regret, I have not the strength.”

He managed to slide down to the ground without breaking anything. Wearily, he shouldered the carcass and turned westward, toward the tunnels. It would be a long and wearying walk, but the sun was out and the day was clear and bright. Bruce would sup with the folk this night.

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